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She was beautiful like a sand castle made of dust and tears,
different then any girl I met in my long years.
Eyes of crystal and blue, skin of white and hue, hair of gentle curls,
if love can conquer anything, then with her I take worlds.
She was beautiful like a sand castle made of dimonds and pearls,
different then any girl on any single world.
The days went by as the time stood still, I always loved her and I always will.
She rested in my heart and laid in my arms, even when she's gone she will still.
different then any girl I met in my long years.
Eyes of crystal and blue, skin of white and hue, hair of gentle curls,
if love can conquer anything, then with her I take worlds.
She was beautiful like a sand castle made of dimonds and pearls,
different then any girl on any single world.
The days went by as the time stood still, I always loved her and I always will.
She rested in my heart and laid in my arms, even when she's gone she will still.
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if love can conqure anything, then with her I take worlds.
That's just a beautiful line.
However, you need a proofer. I'm only saying this b/c you have "Advanced Critique Encouraged."
differant - different
dimons - diamonds (someone else pointed this out already, I think)
You really should fix it! If someone stepped all over my artwork I'd (bash their head in first) certainly wipe it off.
That's just a beautiful line.
However, you need a proofer. I'm only saying this b/c you have "Advanced Critique Encouraged."
differant - different
dimons - diamonds (someone else pointed this out already, I think)
You really should fix it! If someone stepped all over my artwork I'd (bash their head in first) certainly wipe it off.