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Sample :: Enter Sodomon by `gatekeeper501:icongatekeeper501:





[The forest path was probably the safest way for them, but lucky for Radian, Lesendra knew a better trail.]

I couldn't understand it, suddenly I was in a land that was as vast as my eyes could see. How could someone feel safe, feel normal when you can never see the end of the horizon? This girl didn't seem bothered at all by this, her and her people are very, very strange.

"No, its best if we dont move through the thick brush, horses dont move well through it. I know of a better trail." Lesendra said as she pointed further towards the suns shield.

[Suns shield means 'south', since in Radian's belief, the sun is a soldier of the sky that patrols the world every day. If you head west, you head towards the suns back, if you head east, its towards the front, if you head north, you head towards his sword. The sun carries his sword in his right hand and his shield in his left.]
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This is the first appearance of one of my favorate characters, Sodomon. A fire mage Reija-hein.

Reija in elven means a word much like 'Value'. But Reija-hein means 'Most Valuable' or 'Very Valuable'. But when spoken just 'Reija' it means 'Valueless'.

Reija-heins are related to elves in a strange manner as they chose when losing their wings for a short life, rather then a long life like their elven cousins. Reija-heins dont live any where nearly as long a life, but their flesh and body regrows at an fairly good rate. But I wont say much more about that.

Sodomon is just one of the strange races and people you will find in Sunset Journeymen.


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:iconkanda-cgroom:
I wonder who is this new char and what'll be his importance in the story ^_^
can't wait to read the next !!

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He's pretty important.

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:iconkitton:
Are you ever going to publish this? It looks great!
:icongatekeeper501:
Yes, it is getting published by Arcana Studio's.

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:iconkitton:
Cool, I will have to check it out, the art looks amazing and from what I read it sounds interesting!
:iconarbiterchrono:
hmmm?

you want advanced critiqe as well....

I'm not really at your level but i think you should buff him up..

give him a subtle six pack.

just a thought. ^_^
:icone-moyott:
Wow... :shock: Your work is sugoi!!

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He's a mage and is very well built for one at that. ;)

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